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by FridusBlueheaven Oct 29, 2007
Sadness, depression /
Title : A Girl With Beautiful Mask
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven
A girl with the beautiful mask
There's a lot that I need to ask
Could you show me anything real?
Could you tell me what you truly feel?
A girl overshadowed by masquerade
I see that your heart sharp as a blade
You tried to be good but seem too late
You want to move, but seem you're afraid
A girl overwhelmed with confusion
I see you're caught in your emotion
Can't help with your endless devotion
But get real, it's not a great conclusion
A girl with jewelry along her skin
Still you remember places you've been?
Can you feel the one who will hold you tight?
Or you'd rather chasing love through the night
A girl with the mask in her face
Is this thing that you've tried to taste?
When it all lies, will you still amazed?
Oh girl, you must escape from this maze
2007 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)
Loved this poem!!
You pretty much described me!
Wow that was just amazing.
I really liekd the flow and the message you
put through with this. Wonderful.
Thank you for the comment on my poem.
GOSH another GRRREEEAAATTTTTTT POEM!! it had niice flow and it was definitly one of ur best! good work! 5/5
This was a very nice poem.
the emotion was well captured.
and wording was amazing.
the format was good.
and the imagery was outstanding. :]
by Marc Ortiz
Well this poem really deserves a perfect 5! :) I love your style in writing. I also love the title of this poem. Flow was smooth. Keep up the good work.