This is now one of my favorit poems of all time, I haven't been on the site for a long time because I coulden't handle it and I just coulden't bring myself to connect with any of them poems but I really do with this one. You really did an amazing job on this one!
Ooooh, i think this is my favorite. I can really relate. and that is what really gets people, when they have a personal connection with a poem. I can sometimes be this girl. But i try to show the real me when i can. This has given me great inspiration, thank you. Also, read more of my poems if you can, i have a few like this, but i can't remember their names. keep up the excellent writing.
Another very great poem full of emotion *which is the most important part of a good poem* and wonderful imagery =) I understand and relate to being a girl hiding behind way to many masks and lies =P Great job writing this one as well =) 5/5
You write really beautifully and I appreciate your work alot. You have alot of talent and passion deep within your heart. Keep using it to create such amazing poems. Well done on this. It was truely fab. Loved it.