Comments : A Girl With The Beautiful Mask

  • 12 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Liked it! Very unique and descriptive poem filled with emotion. Flowed very well too.....keep writing! Give this one a 5/5 ! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ixora

    Heh i sensed your confusion here. i like the honesty in your writing

    *^*crow*^*

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    This is now one of my favorit poems of all time, I haven't been on the site for a long time because I coulden't handle it and I just coulden't bring myself to connect with any of them poems but I really do with this one. You really did an amazing job on this one!
    Auna

  • 12 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Ooooh, i think this is my favorite. I can really relate. and that is what really gets people, when they have a personal connection with a poem. I can sometimes be this girl. But i try to show the real me when i can. This has given me great inspiration, thank you. Also, read more of my poems if you can, i have a few like this, but i can't remember their names. keep up the excellent writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Wow, this is filled with pure emotion,
    i love it!
    excellent work,
    i can relate to every line!
    keep up the awesome work! =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Another very great poem full of emotion *which is the most important part of a good poem* and wonderful imagery =) I understand and relate to being a girl hiding behind way to many masks and lies =P Great job writing this one as well =) 5/5
    ~*Rhea*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Taz

    Wow that is like amazing no joke i loved it!!! u deserve a 5!!!
    gd luck && all da best!!
    ~TaZ~

  • 12 years ago

    by Broken Ballerina

    Nice i loved it
    its just amazing

    love u take care

    ~jess~

  • 12 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    Amazing! The flow of the words is captivating and the emotion expressed is so enchanting...

    Great work!

  • 12 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    This is such a great poem and the flow is amazing the emotion is great and very discriptive i love it keep it up :) 5/5

    --emz--

  • 12 years ago

    by Miu

    Beautiful poem, the flow was amazing and also i found the whole poem quiet unique. It was so sweet and soft same time written to a girl who is trapped. Amazing! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by stephanie

    I really like this one its so misterious and sounds as if it could be put into a play type thing and all.....wellumm ttyls
    steph

  • Good poem. Flowed very well and well written. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 12 years ago

    by Pete

    Really strong and emotional piece. You display your visual imagery nicely in this one, you truly have a very imaginative mind.
    As always flows very nicely, doesn't seem forced at any stage.

    The thing that separates this from your other pieces, for me, is how full of emotion it is. Really enjoyable poem

    Keep up the good work.

    ~Pete.

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    Amazing job on this one!

    I loved how you started each sentence .. it was engaging. The rhymes did not seem forced and the flow was fluid.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poems very unique, I really enjoyed reading it. Your rhyming was nice again

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very enjoyable to read. It was full of emotion. Once again there were a few mistakes, but I've looked past them and just enjoyed it as it is.

    Very nicely written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    A girl overshadowed by masquerade
    I see that your heart sharp as a blade
    You tried to be good but seem too late
    You want to move, but seem you're afraid"

    ^^how I adore that stanza. So much depth and emotion portrayed in those few lines that at times it's a little overwhelming.

    "A girl with jewelry along her skin
    Still you remember places you've been?"

    ^^I was thrown of there as skin and been don't really rhyme. Maybe try something else?

    Other than that line thought, your flow in this is absolutely amazing.

    So much melancholy portrayed and yet still so beautifully written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shinobi

    I liked the metaphors and the rhymes in this poem. The concept was nice too, overall 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    You write really beautifully and I appreciate your work alot. You have alot of talent and passion deep within your heart. Keep using it to create such amazing poems. Well done on this. It was truely fab. Loved it.
    5/5
    definitly.
    ~Mel