Changes

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 31, 2007


Throbbing heart
Full of life and love
Beautiful soul
unhindered by sin

Glowing smiles
Warm embrace
No tears streaks
ever on your face

Dying heart
full of death and hate
Diry soul
black with sin

Frowning mouths
no emrace
many tear streaks
on your face

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Liked the poem. There was a lack of rhymes in some of the places and the flow was a bit of. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I thought the pome was short and sweet, the flow was great and I really enjoyed it. the imagery was also excellent - Great job 5/5 GG23

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