Omg this is such a sad poem there are a lot of people hu hav had this happen to them unfortunetly i hav aswell so i hope that it will teach someone sumthing too great work 5.5

--emz--

That was great *applauses* very well written :)

All i can say was this is a beautiful poem..and i loved it...the flow the words the saddness
well just everything really
keep it up gurl
tk care
bree

This was beautifully written. Just stunning.
The word usage was good, the flow was flawless, & the emotions were strong. The last stanza was perfectly written... you did a fantastic job of ending the poem. Amazing job. :]] Overall: 5.5

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Loved this poem very much. The story is told in a nice flow and rhymes here and there. A 5/5 here

Hey,
beautiful poem, very sad, the flow is perfect, I love the words you used, its like a story, and unfortunately very true, many can relate to it. luckly i dont, I have a very nice boyfriend for longer then 2 years, nice work 5/5
kisses stephanie

Awwww thats sooooo good!!! I love it so much....sadly I know how it feels =(! But this was soooo good! 5/5

Wow, v. sad and emotional ... gr8 :)

Aw this sooooo amazing but so sad!!

Wow, this is a very powerful poem. It's very beautiful. I was in that girl's situation once, so it made me sad. It's a great poem. 10/5<---if that was possible but I'll give you the 5/5

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WOW. kyle..... it was amazing. i loved it..... i really REALLY did.

"you gave her up, just cuz she wouldnt put out,"

Nyah! Love this poem; Can majorly relate!!!
Adding this one ot my favourites =) 5/5

This is so beautiful.. Thank you... great job

As promised I am FINALLY commenting. I thought it was a good poem. The message it was sendng was very powerful. The overall rhyme scheme was pretty good, but could use a little bit of work. There were a few gramatical errors that threw off the flow, but not too bad, but overall a good poem. Nice Job.

My favorite lines were:

you pretend not to hear her, as you get rough,
but she pushes and shoves, shes too tough.

Wow that was great! i loved it it reminds me of how i've felt quite a bit! :(

I kno that feels except my guy didnt wait. he just raped me right there....i wasnt a virgin when he raped me but still...i didnt want to anyways

I really liked it! :]

This is beautiful. It's so wonderfully written, sad, and heartfelt. Amazing!

So amazing, and so many people, including myself, can relate. its amazing, true, and over-all reality.

This is great, and extremly vivid. i loved reading every bit of it. keep writting