Oblivious

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Nov 3, 2007


Oblivious to the flames
Grazing the horizon
An explorer sets out
To seek the Holy Grail.

-first impressions? do i need to add more, or is there enough power in those four lines?

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I think u should add more, with few lines it's hard 2 tell exactly wat it's about, or u could make in2 a quote
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Tony

    Seems like the meaning is there , I think it works as it is.

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