Lost Angel

by Pete   Nov 3, 2007


The dark side ensnares this strayed lonely entity.
Jealousy, Lust and Pride roam its identity.
Sinister thoughts of the sins you'd perform.
Plaguing those thoughts is a lack of reform.

~~~~~~~~~~~Jealousy~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Needing to gaze at her soul through human eyes.
Of your desperate desire you wish to apprise.
You wish to be mortal, content in her embrace.
Loathingly; loyalties bitterly misplaced.

~~~~~~~~~~~~Lust.~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lips so full and rich, ones you long to kiss
Held lovingly together in such taboo bliss.
Naked bodies cling like fresh shooting vine,
Writhing in passion bodies intertwine.

~~~~~~~~~~~~Pride.~~~~~~~~~~~~
You're above being subjected to such desperate urges.
Out of spite for all humans, your prides re-emerges.
A human doesn't deserve your discard from Eden.
Why suffer a place where all beings are even?

Emotions not associated with this spiritual being,
Feelings that a fall from grace is guaranteeing.
Despair at the passion and the wishes thereof,
Share some compassion for a lost angel in love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    Wow! An enchanting write... The interpretation in this poem is superbly written and expressed with amazing verity.. I am immersed in the creativity in your writing... The combined words and the way you create such beautiful and vivid imagery is astounding... This poem is so going to my favorites...

    5/5! (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    This is simply breath taking. I love how you have simply broken down each stanza.. the jelousy, lust, and pride.

    The flow is amazing in each verse and each emotion screams aloud. I do not understand how something so amazingly written has not been discovered by more poets on this site.

    It is as though you have taken a look at different times in my life and quilled those moments so elogantly.

    When talking about these emotions one normally leaves a bitter taste in the readers mouth; however, you have done just the opposite and leave me wanting more.

    I feel as though I become lost in your words and there is nothing else around expect for the vivid images that you so gracefully implant upon my imagination.

    Such a sour topic for most, but the way you penned it has left me uterrly speechless and there are no words that can describe the enjoyment that I recieve from reading your portrait portrayal of poetry.

    ~~Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    "Naked bodies cling like fresh shooting vine,
    Writhing in passion bodies intertwine."
    ^A truly "hot" line but in a really artsy way. I loved your stanza about lust.

    A wonderful poem, I wonder why you specifically picked pride, lust, and jealousy though. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    Really well written, very descriptive.

    The structure you used was quite unique.

  • 16 years ago

    by gack60

    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is truely an amazing piece of poetry.

    I loved the style, the rythem, the rhyming structure, everything about this piece is awsome. I especially liked the way you broke down the emotions in the way you have, it really describes in detail what you are trying to portray with ease.

    An absolutley wicked piece m8y.

    100/5

    Gaz.

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