Cant stand any more

by kasia nicole   Nov 4, 2007


I hate you
get out of my life
i cant stand your bullshit and your white lies
you go around saying you love me
but once your gone you cant stop talking shit about me whats up with that
your a two faced player
no wonder why my father left you
when you were pregnant with me
go and look around
none of your kids loved you
cant you see the pattern
they have all left you
you try to act all cool when your in control
when the guy you say loves you is around
and every time he yells at you
you always put it on me
i cant stand it any more
i never did any thing to you
so i don't know why you have a problem with me
is it because I'm not one of you
deep down in side its dark and blue
but i know you don't even care
for the way you show it to me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I sense a great anger in this piece, I love the tone of the poem it shows your emotions throughout this poem, well done.

    I have one suggestion to improve this poem. Try to use more punctuations.

    Nonetheless a great poem.
    Thanks for the comment :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Love it, its so beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken

    I think it is strongly expressed and i love that about it. I can almost hear someone yelling within the poem.
    great job 5/5 keep writing =]