Just forget about it

by crystaljean88   Nov 4, 2007


All was great,
Till this day.
Whats the reason,
I feel this way?

No more happiness,
Just tears.
Finally I'm broken,
After all these years.

Lie after lie.
Its your habit.
Leave me alone,
Just forget about it.

No more love,
This is the end.
No more kisses,
Feelings i wont send.

Now were over,
Memories i will forget.
Don't say your sorry.
Just forget about it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    This was wonderful!! My favorite poem that I've read all day! It was really deep, had a nice flow, I loved it! It was really deep. 5/5 for sure!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Well done! The rhyming was perfect and the theme stayed consistent. Only thing I would have to say are mechanical errors: "you're" instead of "your" and "we're" instead of "were." Other than those petty complaints though, great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Simply deep. I love it. 5/5 from me!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Nice. Straight to the point. Tell it as it is. Nice flow, nice rhyme. 3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by twistedlover

    I like this poem, it feels like you put alot of time and effort into it. I hope you continue to right. :)

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