My first time

by alwayssofresh16   Nov 4, 2007


I finally lost something
that I tried so hard to keep
the pressure had built up
and I took the final leap

I found the guy I love
and my feelings for him are real
I gave to him my all
and know true love is all I feel

at first I was afraid
and he was there to comfort me
he told me I would be okay
and he'd be as gentle as can be

he laid his body onto mine
and asked if I was sure
I said as sure as I can be
because I could never love you more

at first my body tenses up
and pain is what I felt
he said hush I won't hurt you
and his voice was so heartfelt

but after that my body eased
and a warmth came over me
it rushed all through my body
and then he said faintly

I don't ever wanna let you go
but I couldn't even speak
the feeling was so good
but it made me feel so weak

and when we were reaching the end
it felt like I reached my peek
I screamed and grabbed him tight
and a tear ran down my cheek

This is a day in every girls life that they are going to remember so make sure it's with the right person.

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  • 15 years ago

    by butterfly

    Wow that was AWESOME you have talent

  • 16 years ago

    by Morgan

    That poem is so real and true it made me remember my first time

  • 16 years ago

    by mehul

    Hey girl it is really heart crying ur having real talent in this age oh my god wen u will be grown u can win big poetry award get on & go with it...

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a great poem, I really like the story in it... Anyway to improve this I would suggest you to use 'descriptive words' so the reader can really picture the poem. Anyway keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by PennyM850

    You put that into words very well. It was easy to read. The only thing I thought you could improve on was the ending. It just seemed to stop abruptly. But, very good.

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