Faith At The Crossroads [Collab]

by ABake   Nov 4, 2007


Faith At The Crossroads

Walking toward the vivid light
On this black and windy road
Stopping with a sudden halt
Pondering which way to take

Should I go left or right?
Or is this just a test?
Should I say pass,
And keep going to the next?

It is my decision,
To go left or right.
Which way should I choose,
For I don't really know.

My thoughts are sort of dazed.
In the distance I see a light,
I shall choose the left.
For maybe this road will lead me back to you.

�© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion And Amber

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Collaboration with Italian Stallion

Italian Stallion: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=144412
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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful. I also have been in a postion where I had to choose a certain road opening it was the one that lead me into my loves arms. You and Italian Stallion did a wonderful job! Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "toward the " << TowardS.

    I really liked the poem so don't take what I have to say the wrong way.

    Okay, your poem is kind of story like. There's the idea of it . . and the idea of it. There's a bit of emotion but it's not emotional enough to be poetic like. If that makes sense. You did a great job, but it's just . . poitn blank. There's no getting around what you're saying. No reason for us to ponder, no reason to wonder, nothing. . .
    It tells it straight.

    Which is good sometimes.
    But, I just don't think it was good with this poem.

    I'm going to give you a 4.5 . . .and it breaks my heart. :|
    Because, you're wonderful at writing.

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