Nature Game (haiku)

by OHgreenman   Nov 5, 2007


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squirrels playing tag
rustling leaves under pine tree
chilly autumn day

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  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    So the last week I went to a community college to test for work...I was sitting in the court yard and I heard this loud noise come from above...two squirels came RACING down the tree. For like 10 minutes I just watched these fools chase each other. It was soooooo amuzing!!!! I swear it looked like they were having fun...

    I love reading poems that remind me of silly little things that I would have forgotten...I love it!!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I loved this poem, it was so beautiful and peaceful though had this cheeky sense to it from the animals. I adored this haiku and found it to really make me smile. So much said in such a short poem. Nicely done~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I adore your haikus, you always portray such amazing, breathtaking imagery in them. Another one beautiful piece from you, with captivating and inspiring atmosphere.
    Greatly done!