Remember (Part 1)

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Nov 6, 2007


Right here in my presence
I have promised
To come see you
Even in my stage

You chose the road of separation
And you don't know how this affects my heart
Lord, please help me and don't let
My soul go into pieces with this visit

He doesn't listen to me
Being there laying down
He doesnt look at me or hug
He's doesn't say anything

It's my fault for not keeping my promises
Making you go through sad days
How come I couldn't see
That I was acting bad

Now the pain wants to kill me
Wherever I stand
The rumors start around me
When I do something bad

Like that I lost something dear
People talk without stopping
Without even knowing
Everything that's going between us

But now it's too late
You chose your path
You left me
And you completed your mission

But I will fight
So I can actually feel
I know it's impossible
But I'm going to keep trying

My feelings today incriminate to your life
Tomorrow I will find a way out
Because this closes me into a vicious circle
From something that can be so beautiful

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  • 16 years ago

    by Freedom

    Very emotional,touching :) i loved

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    GOOD POEM, BUT I DON'T LIKE IT CAUSE U WROTE IT FOR HIM.

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was so emotionally. It's like sadness was flowing off the pages. Heartbreaking, yet wonderful to read.

    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Ohhh how sad I really enjoyed it. Now I feel the emotion and everything good job

  • 16 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    The ending was beautiful and the flow was great you r a really good poet