Dancing in the Rain (short)

by JustKristina   Nov 6, 2007


Lets go dancing in the rain...
Lets wash away all of our troubles
And all of our pain.

Rain doesnt judge like people do,
It doesnt care if you have many troubles
Or only just a few

Lets go dancing in the rain...
Lets wash away all of our troubles
And all of our pain.

*hey guys, i'm still working on this one.. but i've drawn blank.. any advice or ideas would be WONDERFUL! and i will give you recognition if i like ur ideas.. thanks soooo much!!*

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Good work so far. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by IfYouWantMe

    Haven't we danced in the rain together before????LOL Good work...just add a little more um...rain...LOL

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    I love it how it is, its very beautiful. It expresses how nature doesn't care what you've done or what you're going to do, it will always forgive you and give you a new chance. Keep up the good work. ^_^ *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    I think you should say "Let's go dance in the rain" but decide yourself...
    The meaning is nice and it's a little sad. Let's dance in the rain because it's the only thing that can cure our pain...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by natalie

    Hey i have a suggestion wat about

    Lets go out dancing in the rain
    Lets wash away all our troubles
    and pour out the pain

    let me know wat u think thanks

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By JustKristina