My life

by cowgirlstar26   Nov 6, 2007


I'm drowning here
within the ashes of my childhood
I hit the ground when I fly
my whole life, misunderstood

you say I don't try
but that's all I've done
no one sees these tears
this person I've become

slammed into the earth
my heartbeat grows distant
I can hardly hear the sound
as my dreams hit pavement

casted aside to bleed
I'm alone in this world
Only God can save me
this shattered little girl

one day I'll be free
I'll brake the chains
no one will tell me no
I'll make my own way

as I'm screaming here
you walk by complaining
taking your life for granted
while the life inside me is fading

if you only knew
if you only could see
why I'm who I am
why hidden in this life, is me

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This piece is filled with overwhelming sadness. You expressed your emotions greatly. Whole poem is very touching and it flows flawlessly.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - I'm drowning here
    within the ashes of my childhood
    I hit the ground when I fly
    my whole life, misunderstood-
    ^^
    Great start, it pulled me straight into the piece.

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Me

    Thi is sooo beautiful ..I really like it .very emotional and very reall .5/5 keep up the good work