by Kelvin Masi Nov 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
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You are like a star in the sky, there for all to see, but you come home at night for me, but you are there for friends and kids. But remember not only my "does" but my "dids". I love you now with my heart. Its not the end; its only the start. If i see you fall, i'll make a wish. When i'm hungry, you'll be my main dish. |
by Brix Ambray
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Simple nice poem...love is amazing |
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Lol like the ending |
by Stephanie
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This is pretty good poem. i enjoyed it |
by Hollywood
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I liked it...but it could be alot better use spaces and commas and peroids...its a good start |
by mikaella
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Awww this is so sweet your good with words and your a good writer! you should comment my poems |