Mistakes

by HollyNichole   Nov 10, 2007


I think i made a big mistake
something that i can not fake
everytime i see your face
i look away and pick up the pace
i cant explain the way i feel
its like im the only one who knows its real
i wish i could just take it all back
cause' being around you is what i lack
i sit here now and wonder why
im so confused, i just want to cry
i didn't relize what i had
and when i see you i feel bad
why did i have to let you go
that, i'll probably never know

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sora

    A very true poem. and so pure. i loved it. i've felt that way before. i can relate. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 17 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Very well written, nice and short, too. your rhymes come naturally and there's grammatically hardly any mistakes and all of that is hard to come by. most people suck. ur an exception, keep writing ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by HollyNichole

    Thanks for all the comments everyone i really appreciate it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Everyone else said it all great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Everyone else said it all great job! 5/5

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