My daughter.

by TwilightSecrets   Nov 11, 2007


I saw her grow
Her feelings show
I helped her walk
And to talk

I showed her love
Her gift from above
I sent her to school
Helped her be cool

I bought her a car
Her wish upon a star
I didn't see the crash
I didn't see the ash

I held her hand
Light as sand
I heard myself cry
as i watched her die

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marina

    I am so sorry for your loss... this is tragic.. but i do knwo what it is like to loose people to car crashes... just last year, i lost 6 of my best freinds, and i was nearly in teh car... i .. almost stepped into the car... i wrote a poem about it to vent wehn a teacher brought it up in school.. anyhow 5/5 this is amaizing.. i'll get back to you on what poem it is.. if you ever need to talk, i've got an amaizing ear..
    -Marina

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Awwwwwwwww, I would never thought of this and u wrote it so nice. Sorry for your loss. Hopefully she rest peacefully!

  • 16 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Your feelings of sorrow are felt in the words you have written. I am sorry for your loss, may you one day you find the peace that need within your heart.

    sadaddy

  • 16 years ago

    by sarah

    Am sorry for your loss if this has happened 2 u i know how tuff it is gr8 poem, take care . saz !

  • 16 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    So simple and short but sends a mesage across, beautiful.
    sorry for your loss