Dances for Me

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Nov 11, 2007


I sit here and ponder
Whether or not its true,
That my heart
Is the only one for you.

Every movement
Of your body,
Indicates a feeling stronger,
Stronger than everybody.

The simple glance
Of your hazel eyes
Touches my heart
As it freely flies.

[Your warm embrace,
Holds me gently
Against your skin
So smooth and lovely.]

Those sweet lips
Pressed against mine,
A heavenly treat,
Oh so sublime.

Your body dances
Only for me
When your heart
Flutters gracefully.

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I haven't written a from the heart love poem in a while. It's not to great and needs constructive critism. Please and Thank you.

edit: the it in the brackets- someone suggested i got rid of that part. suggestions?

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I like, i don't see any reason 2 change it, it's a very passion-filled poem and i can relate 2 every word! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful love poem! I loved the emotions you described because the warmed my heart and made me think about my loved one. The title was attention grabbing and overall the poem was a joy to read.

    "The simple glance
    Of your hazel eyes
    Touches my heart
    As it freely flies."
    ^wonderfully said!

    Well done . *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I loved this poem... it was lovely.
    I feel this way a lot XD

    The way you expressed how you felt was beautiful..
    And the rhyming scheme was flawless.
    I loved the emotion in this poem.

    Nicely penned
    5/5

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