Pencil Me In

I like this . very nice. 5/5

Wow really good. i have a suggestion if you don't wanna listen to it its fine but ill tell u anyways. i think you should separate it into 3 or 4 different stanzas but thats just my opinion and sorry if i made you mad for tell you!

Your pencil has done it again. Brilliant metaphors come to life with the excellent imagery. Unique and thought provoking. Great job once again!

My silver line shakes shimmering blue....of dreams in heaven with you..In rainbow colours I have seen your face, etched in crimson red...a secret place
Snow on the mountains i wait for you
til the sun comes burning through...
In stillness, I wait, looking at the sky so blue

Debbie
This piece you have written about your dreams and fantisies with your love is wonderful.

Ish and Don
Strum and hum love songs
Fill the potted palm jungle
Over the rainbow

When we can't go to paradise we bring paradise to ourselves.
I know your dreams will come true.
Love Cindy