Splashes (Palindrome)

by Elapsed   Nov 14, 2007


Splashes
Ominous looking clouds
Trickling tiles
Silently drizzling
Elegant looking droplets
Umbrellas, obscured glances
Puppies drenched, muddied
Overflowing gutters
Tapping windows
Rain

*reflect*

Rain
Windows tapping
Gutters overflowing
Muddied, drenched puppies
Glances obscured, umbrellas
Droplets looking elegant
Drizzling silently
Tiles trickling
Clouds looking Ominous
Splashes

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    You did an excellent job on this very difficult form.

    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You pulled it off anyway!! See...I told you so.
    This is truly beautiful, Sammy.
    You have proven to be a very skilled writer!

    5/5 always for you, Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Bravo on the palindrome! Wonderful images written true to this very difficult style....

    Word choices excellent....flows nicely and everything fits!.....a pleasure to read! Take care, Debbie

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