Sweet Love

YOU'LL ALWAYS HAVE ME BY UR SIDE BABY!

"I know this is true love
Because you true me right"

^^ Is that supposed to be treat me right?

I love the similies you used in this piece, they were beautifully done and create such wonderful imagery at the same time.

I love the 'not giving up or letting go' tone of this piece, I found it to be very heart warming and somewhat inspirational.

The title was just wonderful and truly captured my attention.

"Our love is sweet
Like a child's favorite candy
Your kisses are sweet
And taste like a strawberry"
^beautifull imagery.

Well done.

Well it was a good poem.. you have some minor errors though.. Flow is a little off at some lines..

Because you (true) me right
= That didn't make sense to me, sorry. - Maybe it's just me.

I have one suggestion :)
Try to use punctuations it will really enhance this poem.

Nonetheless, good job. Keep writing.

A wonderful peice.
Its so sweet and filled with love it's heart warming.
The content was relatible, and I say where your words were coming from.

Excellent.
--Elaine