So, I started reading this and instantly knew it was explaining exactly the situation I'm in right now. This was amazing! Great job on this, really. Great!

:)

I like your choice of words here. It is a fantastic song. Great Job! I will keep reading more of your work.

I really enjoyed these lyrics they were quite beautiful with a touch of sadness flowing throughout it. The chorus was strong I think you portrayed your emotions into this deeply and it became heartfelt and touching. My boyfriends 3 years older then me we've been together for nearly two years. Age is just a number. Remember that sweetie. =] Again a great piece which was amazing. Keep up the great work. 5/5 ~Mel

I can relate to this poem i can relate to it a lot i seem to go after the older ones i don't know why i just do.....but i love this poem this poem i mostly true about me and those older boyz can have some effect on young girls if they dont be careful
love-always

That's amazing, thats just how i feel about someone, but don't get strung up over a guy, trust me, it's not worth it.

Thanks beautiful! I'm sure most people can connect with this poem, I know I am. Tehe. Well written peace, keep writing (5/5). x

I love it omg its amazing i have been it ur shoes..

I fell in love with this song the minute i started reading it...wow u have unique talent which i love. I can relate so much--and you should tell him--i did and it was good for some time...things happened and now they r okay--we r still friends. for your sake i know it will be good

Ooh wow.. I neva thought of it. You got amazing talented!

A beautiful & magical poem... I loved it...

Omg the like 1st 2 stanzas i can totally relate to
Good Job!!

Whoa...that is really good keep writing and dont be afraid to let it out the more you keep in and keep wondering the more confused it will get

Omg i just love it and i want to say i know how u feel

This was awesome like woah! This poem tugged on my heart strings. I've felt this way and I've been in your place before. It ended awfully and he ended up using me, but things don't always have to go that way. Hopefully one day you can tell him how you feel and things will turn out alright.

The darkness once threw her around
Pushed and shoved her to the ground.
Then he came and made her smile,
She's liked him for a little while

^^^This stanza made me cry. literally. It brought back so many memories. The way you wrote this poem made it so great. You are very talented. Keep it up and check out my worl if you like. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Ok this is the most amazing poem...i love it. It makes so much sense and its so easy to comprehend! This is amazing! Amesome work! 5/5

Real sweet

Cute going through this tooo:/
good luck