Radiant Angel {Haiku}

"An Angel came down
In a mystical flower
As she tore her wings"

^ Such beautiful words you use! :)
- 'Mystical Flower' - makes me picture me looking up and seeing her slowly falling from the sky... as if she has control where she falls.
- 'Tore her Wings' - Such beautiful imagery! It makes me think of the angel.. and how she slowly falls... and her wings tearing.. it leaves such love and such a feeling of hurt also in my heart. It feels both lovely and sad.. as if the Angel has 'broken' her wings... and this could mean alot of things... but to me... it means she can't fly... which is what every Angel can do... and it hurts me knowing she can't fly.

Beautiful poem. Loved every bit of it!

` Keep it up! :)

` Good luck :)

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xx

I don't really like haikus normally....cuz i feel like they can't express a whole feeling (but what poem can...?) but i adored this. so much. great job

I really like this one.
I like the subject.
Think you wrote it very well.
Anyway, enjoyed reading it.
Take care

The images here were flawless and amazing. 5/5

It's great and this genre is the genre I loved. It's 5/5!!!