Why I write

by Kaila   Nov 18, 2007


Escaping to a magical place,
not being able to see your face,
escaping with friends and family too,
Knowing never again will I have to see you.

Staying up all night with people that mean most,
Knowing you're half way across the coast,
Laughing with family shopping with Mel,
Hopeing your in a place worse then Hell.

Spending mother daughter time laughing all day,
I'm so glad you're somewhere far, far away,
Water fights and drinking lemonade in the sun,
Laughing now because you no longer have fun.

Just being me, never needing to impress,
I know you're out there following the rest,
Living life to the fullest, never judging my past,
Thank God you're gone forever, thank God at last.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow this is another amazing poem. It was really well written and the flow was great. You can tell a lot of emotion was put into this poem. You did a great job on this poem and I really enjoyed reading it. You really got your point across. Nice job again. 5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    I noticed you wrote a lot of love and explicit poetry. I wanted to stay away from that sort of thing for a while, so I decided to read this one. I liked it. It's a very different feel from your other poetry. It sort of explains why you wrote the other poems, and I can understand.

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Really Great Job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    I like your use of words. this poem was a great one. i just wonder who that person was that you wanted away at last. its a beautifully written poem and im glad that persons gone if you really didn't like them. great read. write more please!! 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    Noticed a spelling error on the line;

    Hopeing your in a place worse then Hell.

    part from that, was a good read, though the flow was a little off at parts

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