I don't want to say good-bye

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 20, 2007


I wish the sun will never rise,
In my arms you'd stay all night,
I can see forever in your eyes,
When I hold you close and tight.

I wish your kisses will never end,
If just for a moment time stands still,
Not only my lover, but my best friend,
My most treasured dreams you fulfill.

I wish that our hands will never part,
Stay beside me, I'll guide the way,
Your the reason for my beating heart,
The thought that starts and ends each day.

I wish that together we will grow old,
Nothing makes me smile the way you do,
We'll be the greatest fairy tale ever told,
I promise my love will never be untrue.

I wish the sun would never rise,
When we're apart I want to die,
I can see forever in you're eyes,
And I don't want to say good-bye.

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  • 16 years ago

    by When heaven breaks whose job is it to fix it

    Thats sooo cute... and real true... i love the way it flows. its really sweet, its the kind of thing every girl wants to hear. i love it! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Very beautifully exspressed....you did an amazing job writing this... a perfect love described...i exspecially liked this part:
    "I wish that together we will grow old,
    Nothing makes me smile the way you do,
    We'll be the greatest fairy tale ever told,
    I promise my love will never be untrue"

    this is how i feel about my fiance.....
    definetly a 5/5:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    A very heart warming poem. The imagery is great. A forever love when you find it is indeed a true treasure.

    I wish that our hands will never part,
    Stay beside me, I'll guide the way,
    Your the reason for my beating heart,
    The thought that starts and ends each day.

    This stanza really touched my heart. Good job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    That was a very nice poem I realy enjoyed it

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    That was a very nice poem I realy enjoyed it

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