by debbylyn Nov 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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While ancient stones carried with snow melt go by |
by Bryan
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This tis a very very good poem, |
by Pete
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Such a wonderfully vivid poem, I rarely read licentia porms, as they are always a little long for my palate. This is so wonderfully beautiful, it fills the page with emotion without needing to state the obvious. |
by Amanda Brown
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"Vernal chill invades this trembling shattered heart |
by Gasttlee
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That was so beautiful. Your imagery flowed so well and I could feel the image coming from the poem. 5/5 |
by Lithium
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Remainders of a feeling, now love has gone |