Who are we to blame?

by Mark   Nov 25, 2007


Gather around the square digged hole
and prepare to meet my dear old friend
a person with the purest soul
a soul we now to heaven send

While we lowered the shell that surrounds his body
a girl came along with a dead black rose
and just when I began to study
the leafs on the flower turned in to crows

day became night when she rolled her eye
and black wings surrounded the day
and suddenly people just started to die
without any could have a word to say

was it God himself, or death that came?
a mystery of greater divine
or are we just ourselves to blame?
that for death we are all waiting in a line

(This poem is not to be read directly, think about it or don't read it)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dragon Slayer

    Great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    I love this poem!
    So many great qualities i don't know where to start?! HAHA!

    Well done!

    Keep writing!

    Danielle
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A very dark, intense thought provoking poem, well written. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wonderful poem. I love a poem like this that makes you stop and really think. It allows you to use your imagination and apply the poem to a situation that suits you.. the situation can be different for every person. I loved the symbolism in this! it was so wonderful...such amazing word choice and flow! You truly did a fantastic job here! keep it up! your amazing! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hmm, that really makes you think, i like it alot.

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