Tainted Love

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Nov 28, 2007


You make me feel special,
You make me feel right.
You know when I'm wrong,
You know when I'm right.

Nobody knows me better,
Than the way you know me.
I wanna thank you for everything,
For making me happy.

I've known you for as long as I can remember,
And you've been my best friend ever since.
Look at us now,
We're together with a son to care for.

Your tainted love is like no other,
Because you'll never break my heart.
I'll never leave your side,
Because I'll love you 'till our ending days.

[WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST]

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    WOW, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ONE.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    You have some good emotion in here, I think it is a very sweet write, but the flow was off. The first stanza is fine for me, it read nicely, but the rest could come together nicely with a bit of work. It's a good start though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Its good yet unfinished. there could be more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    A very sincere words of LOVE...
    a sweet expressing those feelings..
    a powerful emotions
    and great imagery..

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was very sweet. i didnt see anything wrong with it...
    my fav stanza was the first stanza.. i think it made the poem and it pulls the attention in of the reader.. well done

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