My Turn (Shadow Sonnet)

by debbylyn   Nov 29, 2007


Never believed I'd find true love, never
Prayed for so long for you love I prayed
Forever and longer, yours forever
Laid to rest sadness with promises laid

Meeting of souls in destiny's meeting
Designs in heaven, perfection designs
Fleeting glimpses, love is so fleeting
Resign the heart, unto thee I resign

Last shot at love, have I found love at last?
Pain for so long, can't get over the pain
Past regrets linger, still color the past
Again the tears fall, ink smudging again

Chance of this meeting, slim to no chance
Dance with love's feelings, my turn to dance

**Shadow Sonnet- The Shadow Sonnet was created by Amera M. Andersen, may be written in any sonnet style. The Shadow takes place at the beginning and ending of each line as the words are identical or homophonic. (Rules: 14 lines, 9 or 10 syllables per line. The poem should have a volta or pivit; iambic pentameter is not necessary.)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Awesome and well written. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    First off I would like to thank you for joining the contest,
    This is a very good shadow sonnet debs,
    It followed perfectly, and the flow twas excellent,
    I give it a 5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very impressive!
    Never heard from a Shadow Sonnet before.
    But I think you did a fantastic job!

    I really love the and..
    " Chance of this meeting, slim to no chance
    Dance with love's feelings, my turn to dance "

    Just beautiful
    Loved reading this piece
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    Very Good! 5/5 for me!

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda Brown

    Beautiful as always xx