The Cut! </3

by Christina   Nov 29, 2007


It started with a test
but it didn't end with the best
I fell to the ground
no one around

the knife
it nearly took my life
I'm sitting on my bed
wishing I was dead

the blood is trickling down
as I make a frown
why would I do this to me
how could it be

as I lay
I think of the day
you broke my heart
and we were apart

are love was so strong
and now I long
for you to hold
me again, and when I told
you I LOVE YOU!
and always will

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  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    Now this poem I like, something I can relate to. The words flow quite nicely and was a pleasure to read. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    The title is just simple, but really drew me to read this one. And no wonder, it's another beautiful poem written by you. And I really love the middle stanza of this poem. Great one, of course worth 5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I love this poem...sad but thats what love can do to you....!!!=)

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This was short, but full of emotion. Great poem. The ending was a bit off though. 4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    Wow...This is a good poem it describes me i give it a 5!! =]

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