A voice so small

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   Dec 15, 2007

My voice is small
But can be heard
A cry in the darkness
For empty words

Nothing left
Is far from what I have
My world lies
In a single laugh

Happiness a chore
Loneliness forgotten
The greatest diamond
Remains at the bottom

A life for a life
Falling down slowly
The children smile
Lost and lonely

A voice so small
That can't be heard
Empty cries
For unheard words

I'd be really interested if people could comment on what they think this poem means as everyone has their own opinions


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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    It reminds me of all the miseries in life and how I fell when I think about them or when I'm depressed... I just wanna scream sooo bad - make everyone hear me and stop the madness... but I can't... so my scream stays trapped in my chest and gives me a feeling like I'm out of breath and at the end it comes out as a loooong sigh.

  • 16 years ago

    by Childofthecherry

    Well to me it means that at times everyone can feel lost and alone.
    good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Danni

    It's like a cry for help... to be heard more than seen. that's they way I see it. Awesome poem too!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    I'm not really sure what this poem means.. but that doesn't mean that I don't love it =D I'm guessing it's a cry for help. In the last few lines and during others, that's what it sounded like. I thought you did a great job! 5/5 <3 <3


  • 16 years ago

    by FindingGestalt

    Well when you talk about the children smiling lost and lonely I can only think about my older cousin who's dad ran out and hasn't spoken a word to anybody in years and my younger cousin who's mom is going through depression and when her mom has any strength left in her at all she is fighting with her husband. It's a really good poem.

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