Suicide Note

by Phoenix   Dec 20, 2007


I look into your eyes
I hear your empty promises
and your false praise.
I see through your false smiles
but you don't see me.
I am invisible,
I am disposable.
I was just practice for the others.
You were there while I grew up,
and you pretended to protect me,
but I'm still invisible.
You tried to be nice,
and treat me like the others,
but i always noticed
I knew,
I was nothing but an annoyance to you.
Because of you I couldn't see myself
I saw the nothingness that you saw
I couldn't see me.
But I'm giving you a gift,
to make up for every gift I never gave.
The one gift that can't be exchanged and/or returned.
The last gift I give
to you my dear parents
is this,
My Suicide Note.

Note: the "others" are my brother and my sister in case you didn't figure that out.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    We're disposable
    teens
    I wanna thank you mom
    I wanna thank you dad
    for bringin this ****ing world
    to a bitter end
    ^_^

    mr.manson sang that song.
    I think you need it.
    listen to it my little lettuce.
    listen, and learn.

    -twilight zone music plays-

  • 16 years ago

    by Johnnys Medicine

    Really good write
    sometimes i feel the same way towards my family
    invisible, well chosen word for the situation
    keep writeing
    and keep moving on with a better outlook of your life
    remember
    you decide how well your life feels
    you dont need anyone or anything there to make you happy even if it does make it easyer
    and truse me, no matter how bad things get
    DO NOT go to heroine like i did
    or any of them kind of drugs
    all they will do is destroy you more than you think

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