Hmm, you would think a poem with long sentences would have an awkward flow, however, you managed to defy that.

This was a really good poem, a very deep and powerful story behind it. The only thing I could complain about, is the title. Seemed too simple for such a great poem.

Nonetheless, fantastic job on this one.

I loved it. keep up the great work

Very good =)
keep it up

Very deep

Held captive in a dark and miserable place
A place where mocking demons live
They fill her head with thoughts of suicide and fill her heart with hate

^^I love this stanza. You're a very talented writer. You have a unique writing style which makes ur poems stand out from others. Great job on this piece. kep it up. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Very Beautiful...Great job and good useage of words :] 5/5

Well now it's a 3 line per stanza structure. You really like to experiment on things :) well that's good. If you do a lot of different things you'll really improve in the future. Keep up the good work.

An emotional piece, amazing flow, rightfully written.
This piece of poetry is 5/5. Wow.
I am speechless and I am wowed big time. Thank you for this awesome write.

Never will she be able to let anyone in
In her guarded and secluded world
For the fear of being in love, and then being left again

i love that part i can relate so much to this poem. look at ur ratings lol 5/5 enough said great poem.

Great flow so sad =( but beautiful

"But the illusions in her head soon become too much to bear
To bear all of these intense emotions that cannot be explained
She cant take all of the criticism from the world, she cant take all the stares"

this was my favorite i love how you put this beautiful 5/5

Very well written dark poem