Ridden

by Internal Hatred   Dec 23, 2007


The rage builds up inside,
Cutting through my body.
All I can do is watch,
As I become this monster.
Hate ripping through,
Taking over me,
Washing away all that was,
Making this monster me.
A transformation now complete,
Nothing else to see,
Except this pure rage,
A monster that is me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow! Powerful piece you written here. Great imagery, awe-inspiring write as well. The words beat me deep. The last stanza was beyond belief. Good JoB!

    ^^5/5^^

    YOu deserve it!

  • 17 years ago

    by william

    Your not alone

  • 17 years ago

    by she

    5/5-sad,but alot of feeling in a short poem, really, really good

  • 17 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. a wave of emotion is so powerful from this piece.....would love to know where it came from.....beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by damont

    I like this poem keep writing. sounds very emotional. and yet it seems you being taken over. its short but sweet. what caused this monster to come out i wonder?

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