Angel

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Dec 24, 2007


You went away
And took my heart...
Only God and you know
How much I love you...

You are in my mind at every thought
You are in my heart at every beat...
You are in my soul at every breath
You are in my eyes at every delusion...

..... "I yearn for your beautiful smile" .....

My heat breaks with your memory
My eyes cry with your thought...
My mind is tormented with fault
My soul is lonely without you...

..... "I yearn for your gentle kiss" .....

My present days are filled with pain
In my heart from missing you...
My present days are filled with tired eyes
From a desire to see your face once again...

My present days are filled with imagination
Exhausted from the thought of us
Being together once again...

My present days are filled with a soul
That feels like giving up...
Because it feels so lonely
And lost without you...

..... "I yearn for your comforting hug" .....

And as the days pass by
And I don't get to see your smile...
My heart continues to slowly break
My mind continues with thoughts of fault and torment...

My eyes continue tired and blind
To the search for your smile here on earth...
And my soul continues to fade
Softly day by day...

Because without you, there is nothing for me

...."I yearn for you, Anthony"....

Until we meet again,
You'll live in my heart!
I'll love you you forever,
My fallen angel!

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DEDICATED TO MY ONE AND ONLY LOVE: ANTHONY ALVAREZ TE AMO! I MISS YOU SO MUCH TONY!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Syndicate

    I love the feelings you express in this poem, it's something everyone can relate to. the flow is pretty good and I like the way you organized your stanzas. especially the first two stanzas: eyecatching ;) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandon Lee

    It had a lot of emotion which I like. It did not flow for me though. You used a good variety, except you used the word "yearn" alot. I have noticed that you use that alot which makes it a little more boring to read. I understand that you are using that word because it is a strong word but you should try replacing it sometimes with other words such as "desire" which has the same meaning and strength. I hope you use this constructivly as I do look forward to seeing what you write in the future. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very beautiful and heartfelt...

    "Until we meet again,
    You'll live in my heart!
    I'll love you you forever,
    My fallen angel! "

    loved this stanza...

    U hv execllently penned ur feelings... i cud feel the emotion of ur poem...

    really good..

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Anthony is a very lucky guy.

    Your verse deserves notice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandy

    This poem is sad yet wonderful...I can relate to how u feel...