There is blood on my tongue

by Mr Rhee   Dec 26, 2007


There is blood on my tongue,
from where you bit my lip.
It tastes sweet to me,
reminding me of our last kiss.

My body aches all over,
from when you beat me in my sleep.
The pain keeps me awake,
so I watch you at night.

My mind is weak,
from how you confuse me.
My thoughts go round and round,
wondering if you really love me.

My heart bleeds,
from when you stabbed it with your hate.
It may never heal,
unless you let yourself love me again.

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  • 14 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Aw it was so sad but sweet i mean understanding the loss of someone you cared about so much even if it wasn't perfect you made your meaning well known and thats the point right? I loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Aw, this is such a sad poem. Seems like you really miss that person. Although, the flow was a bit rocky, but it's still good. Will go on my favs!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Void

    Hey it's not a bad go for someone who's taken such a break from writing. I do think you should probably edit your title first, I think you've got an extra 'is' in there. :P.

    Part of me wonders what you could come up with if you added a little more rhythm into it. Not necissarily rhyme, but a pattern of some sort. Maybe challenge yourself with some bigger vocabulary. I don't say this because I don't like your poem, but because I can see (through this write) that you have potential to do something really well.
    Good job though. Not really much advice I can give you.

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