Am i finnally ur best

by she   Dec 27, 2007


I try soo hard to do right,
but im always so worthless in your eye's,
you say i always skrew everything up,
you say you wish you never had me,
well mommy i wish you never had me to
and truth be told,
id do anything to finally make you proud of me.
so as i slide this blade across my wrist
i whisper
"mommy am i finally your best"

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  • 15 years ago

    by 3sA SaNcHa

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Wow..seriously depressing. Good flow

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is pretty good.. i like the concept even though its a sad topic.. but i think you should maybe set it up into poetry form.. like into stanzas .it would read alot better.

    but i liked it the way it was. 5/5. good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    U killin me soft wit ur poems, lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Never change who you are for someone babe xxxx

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