Comments : Rose and the violet

  • 16 years ago

    by tinna

    This is a very deep poem, but yet brilliant!
    this was well written, thank you fr sharing it with me, i cant wait for more of you're work!
    Regards tinna

  • 15 years ago

    by divine divinity

    This is an excellent poem, one of my new favorites. Descriptive enough to help me see whats going on, but no so much that its ruined with a clutter of words. This poem seems very deep, hitting the problems of now and the past while avoiding the politics and just focusing on the love and the confusion of racism. Excellent. I love and think your talented to write something like this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    Oh my god this is great!
    I love ths tory behind it, like a modern day Romeo and Juliet?
    Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Very well written <33

  • 15 years ago

    by CareBear

    It's amazing. You're really good at writing.
    It was totally unexpected..
    keep it up x x

  • 15 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Wow very deep i like it alot makes me wanna jump the father! lol

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    I found this piece extremely deep. but at the same time beautiful too. it had such emotion in it, i could almost feel it. and i also love the title.

    Roses and violets can grow together in harmony.

    i really liked that line. it's amazing how just one little sentence can hold so much meaning. but this poem was lovely, even though it ended sadly, i still loved it! job well done again. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Beautifully written. I agree with the above comment, from The Tears Of Time

    Roses and violets can grow together in harmony.

    Such a short sentence, yet so much meaning. Loved it. Powerful write. Keep this up! 5/5 xXx

  • 14 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Wonderful.wonderful.wonderful. :)
    i liked how you compared the characters to a rose and to a violet..
    the poem was great. full of emotion and it really captures the reader's attention.
    keep it up. 5/5 from me. :D

  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    Aww this is so sad. :(

    It has a very sad & true story behind it, people judging others just becuz of the colour of there skin...

    Wat eva happened to living in peace & harmony?

    Very well written Aish.
    *Hunny*