Esteem

by DazedAndConfused   Jan 4, 2008


He's crying, he's breaking,he's lying, he's faking,
He's hated and taunted,he's wanted and flaunted,
He's a puppet on a string,
An angel without a wing,
He's every guy that you would want him to be,
But he only wants his self-esteem

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  • 16 years ago

    by ariel

    Your poem is very cool it seems to me if you put some really instramentals with it it could be a very awesome song

  • 16 years ago

    by Its a love story

    This is a great poem! i love it! Will you please read one of my poems and rate...maybe comment to? i would really appreciate it! Thanks!

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This is cool
    i like the way it was written i like how u referred him to a puppet on a string that was original
    well written and the flow was good
    great job keep it up
    5/5

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