This one is for you

by SweetSuicide   Jan 4, 2008


This one is for the pain
that you made me feel
Every time i see you I'm in such
discus
So let me be and don't ever talk to me
ill get you back
Its gonna feel so good
Like revenge is a sin
ill smile when your in pain
knowing how much you hurt me
my life will never be the same

Copyright 2008 SweetSuicide

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  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aw... this is soo cute but sad... 5/5

  • Sad, yet beautiful.
    Although, it's a bit confusing, and the flow was a bit off.
    Good job though!
    5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    5/5
    Good poem
    i love the lines
    Like revenge is a sin
    Ill smile when your in pain

    Try to make paragraphs and use capitals wherever reqd.

    take care,
    Roxiee

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This poem is really simple but I feel the emotion and it's really well written!!! You deserve 5/5 for this!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh that was great emotions its not long enough but it really means a lot! the words epressed very well and it has a great piece of thoughts... those lines u had written was flowed well and seems so sincere! keep it up and keep on writing all what u feel 5/5