Do you love me?

by SweetSuicide   Jan 4, 2008


Help me get over it
show me how to smile
I need someone to teach me how
I'v lost all hope
i cant find my way out
this fear of you not loving me
has taking over me
Tell me again why do you love me?

Copyright 2008 SweetSuicide

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  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Aw, short but full of emotion.
    It showed so much images.
    Great job!
    5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Pretty good. deep, meaningful and emotional.
    Taegan Emily xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Pretty good. deep, meaningful and emotional.
    Taegan Emily xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Pretty good! it was short but it was long enough to understand all the message.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    Good job just a few spelling questions....

    Iv lost all hope (I've)

    and

    this fear of you not loveing me (loving)

    Just trying to help 5/5 though :)

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