Help

by HollyNichole   Jan 7, 2008


Whats the purpose of life?
does anyone know?
because im so lost
and i know it must show

im losing my ground
and my feet are slipping
i cant stay steady
i just keep tripping

so much pressure
from everyone around me
i dont understand why
they cant just leave me be

im trying, i really am
to figure this all out
but its so hard
when all everyone does is doubt

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  • 15 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Excellent!! Good job keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by kati

    I know u have already commented!!! but i really love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    No one wants to be alone so i gess the answer thay all wanted was to be with you,
    life is complex and so is love but to live you have to find something to love no one can control you but you are beautiful and yes thats comming from my i know you not but to know your would it your heart that counts not thease verbs.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dustin S

    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Amazing poem. god knows. that's all i can say. god bless you

    buttefly kisses and bear hugz

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