Live with me

by shamvi   Jan 8, 2008


It's not cool
when you live in your head
the words are many
but none spoken
the ideas are there
but none used
the love is so much
but none given
it's not cool
when you live in your head
the world is much smaller
and nobody's in it together

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ryley B

    I have to say that you think beyond imagination wow this one is very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a good poem, I hope you made it longer though. Anyway keep up the good work. Thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Wow this is really good i like it alot and it explains very much its deffently true...i'm actreally one that lives more in there head then in the world and at times it does suck but others its good...love the poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Love this poem, lol how i feel. wish it went longer tho, enjoying your poems heaps.

  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Like this alot good job can realate 5/5

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