Nothing more to say

by Crystallovesmatt   Jan 11, 2008


Everyday is constant despair
my life is full of pain
no one else seems to care
i think I'm going insane

my heart is now broken
my veins torn and bare
so many words unspoken
because no one is ever there

my world is now shattered
my life torn apart
nothing else matters
only loneliness in my heart

so someone tell me why
i should live my life this way
for all i want is to die
theres nothing more to say!

* this is about me i've been through so much hell and i honestly care too much for him to just let it go!! i know i should and part of me wants to i mean its been over two years!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Britt

    I really like this poem its really good...
    i thought the use of words u had were really good....
    i know how u feel in a way bc i liked this boy alot and he liked me to like we never dated but we had a thing for like a month and a half then all of usuden it stopped like one day we were talking and hanging out and the next day there was nothing...
    i miss him so much i dont understand...

    XOXOXO
    Britt

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I can see that you have a talent for writting depression poems and the reason will be that you really went through many aweful things.

    "my heart is now broken
    my veins torn and bare
    so many words unspoken
    because no one is ever there"

    this was my best part in this poem.

    i will tell you this:
    - FIGHT FOR YOUR HAPPINESS IT WON'T COME JUST TO YOU
    - BE BRAVE AND FIGHT ALONE BECAUSE WHEN YOU DO SOMEONE DEFINITELY WILL FIGHT WITH YOU ONE DAY....

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    I know exactly how you feel. I miss someone a lot too, and no matter what they do to you or what happens the feelings for them will never go away..they can fade and become less important, but they will be with you for the rest of your life..=[ *sigh*...but this was a great write! *thumbs up*

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this in a way.
    It is very intense, filled with tones of deep sorrow in each stanza. I don't like rhyming because some of the rhymes are too typical but other than that this is so sincere which makes it deeply touching.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Omg that was sooo deep, I felt like I was reading my life !!!! I especially liked these lines:
    my heart is now broken
    my veins torn and bare
    so many words unspoken
    because no one is ever there
    ... keep it up