Constance;

I<3thispoem your so good the ending is my fave and this is a G.R.E.A.T subject to write about keep it and post some more poems!
I'll be waiting to read them

Noelle Wright

Ohh yeah and 5.5 btw!
Lol

Its really good...sad and hits reality..
well written.

This poem was soo wonderful hun! It was truly sad and filled with so many different emotions all mixed into one. I loved the flow, the rhymning, it was all amazing! Great job darling, you wrote a piece others will defintely be able to relate to. Keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Waaaaa...i know how it feels..i was facin da same situation before....and finally im a lil bit ok now as i have moved in to another country..i dunno if its ur personal experience but i love da way how you wrote it..very emotional...gj..5/5

I liked this poem very much, and I can relate. The only problem I had was the inconsistency of the numbers of lines per stanza...like they were all 4 except 2 stanzas...but its not a big deal or anything...LOL great job though 5/5 <3

This poems reminds me of a novel I wrote (in spanish) called "Confesiones" (Confessions xD)!! =)

Really nice work, I really love it! It's on my favorite poems now. ^^ As Kayla said, "it was truly sad and filled with so many different emotions all mixed into one".

DAMN!!! This is gooooooood!!!!!!! So many can relate, i'm sure....5/5

Very, very true, I live in a small town and everyone knows eveerything that happens and then theres someone that does something else and noone cares anymore

Amazing. u truely are an excelent writer. this poem definiatly spoke to me which is what good poetry should do.

I dnt really no wa 2 say its not tha offan i get speaceless bu omd it sure is a tuching poem

stacey xoxoxox

Wow yet another sad but great poem keep up the exellent work