Lonely

by Brittany C   Jan 18, 2008


Wanting to cry

just to let it all out.

Tired of trying

to figure it all out.

Wishing that your mind

was blank and clear

so that you wouldn't think.

It hurts too much.

Wanting to try

to get everything right,

but nothing seems

to work out right.

Not knowing what to do.

You site and wait,

watching your life

pass you by.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Blackstar

    Really liked to read this.
    the emotions in it ..just discribing how you feel.
    5/5

    -blackstar

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Great write i suppose that the only reason why you skipped lines was to emphasize that it was lonely piece and i like that great work-
    raindrops 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I thought it was pretty good, it didn't flow very well but the poem made a strong impact on the reader. The only mistake I noticed was that "site" is actually spelled "sit".
    ~gabriella.

  • This is a really good poem. I really liked the words you chose to describe it. Although, maybe you whould not skip the lones in the stanzas. It's good though. Great job!! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.