Lustful Glances

Ohh... but what happens after that? Details please! lol... Great write... very deep and emotional. And so well-written. As a writer I truly respect you... and am kinda envious *evil smile* 5/5

Really relate to this...its very good

Wow that was the quickest love story ive ever read=D..i was enjoying the first few stanzas and it broke my heart in the end..it was unexpected but i absolutely love the whole poem...

I think everyone can relate and yeah it happened to me too..i was like totally into this guy and i thought he likes me too but then i found out he was jus being friendly nuthin more nuthin less and i was a lil disappointed..oh well..Good job..5/5

Wow... that was so well written. Your choice of words... every line left me breathless. There was so much emotion! Amazing job.

Connecting souls with only one glance,
Puckering lips I dream about you,
Fogging memory, forget everything,
Nervous, shaking from the intensity.

I love the whole poem, but that stanza just captivated me! It was beautiful!

Oh. Wow. That was... incredible. You have truly blown me away with this one. It held so much emotion in it, and it was so intense! The flow was flawless, and you nailed the word choice to perfection.

"Fogging memory, forget everything,
Nervous, shaking from the intensity."

-shiver- I love love love that couplet. xD
Beautiful job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

-- Steph.