Me looking at you

by Catie   May 16, 2004


U don't know what u do 2 me
u don't have a clue
u don't know what its like
2 be me looking at you

when I'm with you
it seems there are colors all around
were in the middle of a rainbow
nothing ever making a sound

when i hear your voice
my heart skips a beat
those who try 2 take you from me
those i will defeat

when you kiss me
its like the whole world ceases
i wish it could last forever
for my hearts no longer in pieces

you make everything perfect
you gave me a perfect life
and one day you'll come to find
I'm going to be your wife

we'll grow up together
well have a little family
yeah we'll fight sometimes
but ill love you and you'll love me

i will love you forever
and i hope u will love me
i will love you all my life
ill marry you one day, you'll see

U don't know what u do 2 me
u don't have a clue
u don't know what its like
2 be me looking at you

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  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great poem, Catie. Personally, I think you should fix the shorthand and the grammatical errors (or typos). You are missing apostrophes in a lot of your contractions (it's, heart's we'll, I'll) and you also need to capitalize AT LEAST the pronoun "I". I prefer to have the first letter of each line capitalized.... but that's up to each poet, I guess.

    I do love the poem...and especially like your repeat of the first stanza!

  • 19 years ago

    by Million Tears

    hey nice poem !!! very nicely done ! u must really like this person! it would be sweet to give it to them

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