U r my life

by Catie   Dec 31, 2003


U walked up 2 me 1 day
and asked me sumthin strange
it made me feel all weird inside
but i kno it will not change
u asked me wat was more important
u or my life
i said my life of course
u said ull neva b my wife
u walked away not even knoing
how special u r 2 me
i just wanted u 2 kno
my life u will alwayz b
copyright©2004catie

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  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great poem, Catie.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    hi, I really like your poem
    it's very good.. keep up the good work.. Please check out my poems and comment and rate. it would mean a lot to me =)

    hugs
    have a nice day from emilya

  • 20 years ago

    by victoria

    right 4 ur info im the hotties homey in my school you bitc* so dont be trying to comment on my peoms
    and so what if i talk shi* if you dont like it then go to hell and lock the door behind you bitc* dont be hating because my poems are hot and ur shi* is not you should get a life insead of trying to make poems because you suck i mean poem writing isent 4 everyone and it 4 sure as hel* aint 4 u becasue you just straight up suck at writing poems god you poems are trash your writing it crap just give it upm before your poor poema wroting closes down the site

  • 20 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    victoria how dare u come onto sombody else's poem dising them, saying there sh*t when you cant even write a poem yaself!!!!! half the poems i've read of yours aren't ya own so shut ya f*king mouth dising catie coz i think her poems are brill at least she can write her own!!!!!!!!!!!! got any probels about what i said leave a message and ill egnore you ok!
    catie dont listen to her i think ya poems are great and so does all the other ppl that have commented

  • 20 years ago

    by nika

    ur poem is really good its like the quote " one day u'll come up to me and ask me what is more important u or my life and i said my life and u'll just walk away not knowing u are my life" its kinda shows more to it keep up the great writing. And thankx for commenting on my poem.