Soundtrack

by jLegendc   Jan 25, 2008


If only I can put to music,
Those eyes, that smile,
It would be a song that's so romantic,
People would hear it even in a mile...

If I could define you in words,
That would be rare and oustanding,
I wish I would soon be heard,
I wonder how long will I be waiting...

If I could put into melody,
Those laughs, that voice,
I might create a song only for me,
So I will always hear you
even in a crowd of noise...

If I could find a harmony,
For every action, reaction,
So I can always keep with me,
This movie-like attraction...

If there was a pitch,
To how high I would shout out your name,
I would ask Mariah Carey to have
a voice switch,
I'm sorry my feelings are just untamed...

If there is an ending,
I would just continue writing about you,
So no one would be seen crying,
And now let me say that this poem is dedicated to you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I like the storyline of this poem. the idea is beautiful and makes sense. Very creative as well. It was a little bumpy but not bad. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    Aw .it was really romantic and it rhymed a lot and it made sense how you put it together i loved it a lot i wished a guy would write a poem for me like that . the person that you dedicated to must be really lucky to have a guy as talented as you for writing poems .great job .

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    That was a cute and amazing read. that is something that no one could put into words.. 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I like this poem very much, but in the second stanza i think, you repeated the word "voice" twice, and it made it sound a little weird. The rhyming seemed a little forced in places but it was still an emotional poem, 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Very good poem! I loved everything about it starting with the flow and the emotion of passion. The vocabulary was immaculate.

    If I could put into melody,
    Those laughs, that voice,
    I might create a song only for me,
    So I will always hear your voice
    even in a crowd of noise...

    ^^my favorite stanza =}
    Perfectly and beautifully written
    5/5

    PrElUdE 2 A KiSs

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